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My Poetry

Discussion in 'D.I.Y. - Creative section' started by Bananaman, Apr 2, 2010.

  1. Bananaman

    Bananaman Experienced Member Experienced member Forum Member


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    Oki, here are some of my writings. This one is a bit older, I usually don't write stuff in english but this one is english in it's original form. Please do tell what you think.


    COULD IT BE WORSE?

    Walking trough the streets of your town
    Walking so slowly with your head down
    Never thinking about your past
    Never thinking how once you walked proud
    You think how there is nowhere to go
    You think how there is nothing to do
    You don’t remember where you once went
    You don’t remember what you once did
    And now aimlessly you wonder trough the streets
    Tired of everything defeated by boredom
    But still there is a smile on your face
    Coz` they told you it could be worse

    Crawling trough the streets of your town
    Crawling so slowly down on the bottom
    Never thinking back
    Never thinking how once you could walk
    You wonder why are you here
    You wonder why this way things are
    But can`t find the answer
    Yore not sure what`s going on
    Now you are losing strength
    You can`t crawl anymore
    But you are content
    Coz` they told you it could be worse

    But now as you are dying
    You wonder
    Could it be worse?
     
    Bananaman, Apr 2, 2010
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  2. Anom

    Anom Experienced Member Experienced member Forum Member


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    Dec 21, 2009
     
    I'm no expert on poems but i recognize the feeling in it, walking around with boredom comming out of my ears and being totally unable of remembering anyting i could do to change it. Thinking it could probably be worse.
    I like it! (Not that feeling, but the poem...)
     
    Anom, Apr 2, 2010
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