the American dream (new song)

The American dream

all of your life you've been asleep all off your life they kept you blind deaf and numb
you were the happiest person on earth living the American dream
money see money do
mouth sewn shut so you wouldn't speak up
it hurts to open your mouth
it hurts to open your eyes
it hurts to see so you'd rather be blind
this is no dream...

IT'S A FUCKING NIGHTMARE

born a blank paper you were theirs to manipulate
living in apathy taught how to hate
this is what you can get for living a lie
you won't see reality 'cause they keep you blind

stay asleep
my little sheep
and dream what you can be
your dreams they fuel my machine
please keep your eye's closed
SO YOU CAN'T SEE!!!!

now you're chained to the machine
you slave to keep it running
but you keep smiling day after day
because they keep the money coming

now you're sick of the machine
but you find out it's too late
you're old and cold and lonely
was the money worth the HATE!

chorus

tell me what you think please

 

how can anyone take that as an insult and I do have a beat in my head I'm writing the guitar part somewhere this week
@punkmar the SO YOU CAN'T SEE! part is part of the chorus so I basically am ending with it

thanks for the love

nutz!