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the American dream (new song)

Discussion in 'D.I.Y. - Creative section' started by persona-non-grata, Feb 2, 2011.

  1. persona-non-grata

    persona-non-grataExperienced Member Experienced member Forum Member


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    The American dream

    all of your life you've been asleep all off your life they kept you blind deaf and numb
    you were the happiest person on earth living the American dream
    money see money do
    mouth sewn shut so you wouldn't speak up
    it hurts to open your mouth
    it hurts to open your eyes
    it hurts to see so you'd rather be blind
    this is no dream...

    IT'S A FUCKING NIGHTMARE

    born a blank paper you were theirs to manipulate
    living in apathy taught how to hate
    this is what you can get for living a lie
    you won't see reality 'cause they keep you blind

    stay asleep
    my little sheep
    and dream what you can be
    your dreams they fuel my machine
    please keep your eye's closed
    SO YOU CAN'T SEE!!!!

    now you're chained to the machine
    you slave to keep it running
    but you keep smiling day after day
    because they keep the money coming

    now you're sick of the machine
    but you find out it's too late
    you're old and cold and lonely
    was the money worth the HATE!

    chorus

    tell me what you think please :ecouteurs:
     
    persona-non-grata, Feb 2, 2011
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  2. Flores_Magon

    Flores_MagonExperienced Member Experienced member


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    I like it.
    I reminds me of Crass (I hope thats taken as a complement)
    Have you put it to some sort of tempo or combined it with music yet?
     
    Flores_Magon, Feb 2, 2011
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  3. punkmar77

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    I like it too, though I probably would have ended it at, SO YOU CAN'T SEE!!!

    regardless, it is going to be a great song...
     
    punkmar77, Feb 2, 2011
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  4. snookams

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    i like it....last 2 stanzas very subhumansish
     
    snookams, Feb 2, 2011
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  5. persona-non-grata

    persona-non-grataExperienced Member Experienced member Forum Member


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    how can anyone take that as an insult and I do have a beat in my head I'm writing the guitar part somewhere this week
    @punkmar the SO YOU CAN'T SEE! part is part of the chorus so I basically am ending with it

    thanks for the love <3
    :ecouteurs:
    nutz!
     
    persona-non-grata, Feb 3, 2011
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  6. DirtyRottenThrashPunk

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    Nice lyrics man
     
    DirtyRottenThrashPunk, Feb 3, 2011
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  7. trevor9849

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    Reminds me of Discharge, but less repetative
     
    trevor9849, Feb 3, 2011
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