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i can be creative also!

Discussion in 'D.I.Y. - Creative section' started by rude-boy, Mar 19, 2010.

  1. rude-boy

    rude-boyExperienced Member Experienced member Forum Member


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    hmm so when is aw this i was trying to figure out if i have ever made somthign worthy of putting up....and this came to mind. its somthign i wrote after a economics exam while i was waiting for every one else to be done. i have not touched it in years...but hey..maybe some sujestions will spark a few more lines to it or maybe reveiw a line.. i never really liek the last line on the second verse...but i just cant think of anythign to put...im not a very..lyricle person.. ask me to write a short story or essay and ill give you 6 pages...but i could never work my brain around thigns liek poems and lyrics where they have no base and anythign can be said really.. i unno

    CONSTRUCTIVE critisism?


    shot gun blast to the chest.

    point blank range

    rips through the vest.



    one dead cop.

    one officer down.

    i just cant stop





    they come, try to arrest me.

    i will never go down!

    when i am done we will all be free





    one dead cop.

    one officer down.

    filled with lead,busted up with no head!

    mabye he was a father?

    i dont care i will rape his daughter...
     

  2. Anxiety69

    Anxiety69Experienced Member Uploader Experienced member Forum Member


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    Ummm... see a shrink?
     
  3. rude-boy

    rude-boyExperienced Member Experienced member Forum Member


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    pshh those guys...my old high school got me seeing so many of those phd dicks.. they dont change anythign but perscribe you meds....they are the dumbest shit i have ever waseted my time on
     
  4. dwtcos

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    I thought it was pretty cutesy until the part about raping someone daughter..Not cool.
     
  5. rude-boy

    rude-boyExperienced Member Experienced member Forum Member


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    alright well maybe i can fix it.. i wrote that years ago... anything else
     
  6. Probe

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    i thought the raping his daughter part ws kinda funny....
     
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