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Distorted Truth- Utopia

Discussion in 'Band promotion & new album releases' started by WrongfullSuspicion, May 31, 2010.

  1. WrongfullSuspicion

    WrongfullSuspicionExperienced Member Experienced member


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    So I'd like to get some comments on one of my first "songs" ever, it's still kinda experimental, but hey it's my first try at something like a one man band.
    Feel free to give some comments, and constructive criticism is very wanted as well :)
    You can listen to it on Muziboo, some sort of music share site.
    http://www.muziboo.com/thibaud/music/utopia/
     

  2. quas

    quasNew Member New Member


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    i was feeling what the dude was saying and the instrumentals complemented with that well.. i like ^^
     
  3. punkmar77

    punkmar77Experienced Member Staff Member Uploader Admin Team Experienced member


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    Ronald Reagan was an Idiot wasn't he? Good first effort, I think you could have used more sounds in it in the background like sounds of War to illustrate how dangerous his idiotic Patriotic philosophy was.....
     
  4. Bunny

    BunnyExperienced Member Experienced member Forum Member


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    punkmar's suggestion is good, go for some more sound.
    But i for doing this on your own thats a great start. Good work :)
     
  5. WrongfullSuspicion

    WrongfullSuspicionExperienced Member Experienced member


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    Thanks for the great comments/suggestions, I'll see what I can change to make it sound a bit more, maybe incorporate war sounds indeed, and maybe some harmonic guitar bits :)
     
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