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Climax (descriptive... might be considered adult lol)

Discussion in 'D.I.Y. - Creative section' started by Rathryn, Mar 28, 2010.

  1. Rathryn

    Rathryn Experienced Member Experienced member Forum Member


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    I pull it through her slit once again. Waiting for her to come forth with the goodness. I push all the right buttons, until I hear that satisfying moan. Every tells me that she’s playing me, but they don’t understand. I’m actually playing her instead.
    Then after the gratifying moan I get the material of love out of her slit and take it eagerly. I press it between my hands, smell it, taste it, experience it. Oh… how I love ATM’s.
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    Short and sweet, imo.
    Oh yeah this is the first draft so it's bound to have some errors and stuff. Might expand on it later, but this is the basic shell anyway :p
     
    Rathryn, Mar 28, 2010
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  2. Anom

    Anom Experienced Member Experienced member Forum Member


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    Capitalist eroticism at it's best :p
     
    Anom, Mar 28, 2010
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  3. New Face In Hell

    New Face In Hell Experienced Member Experienced member Forum Member


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    Bow chicka wow wow :lmao:
     
    New Face In Hell, Mar 28, 2010
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  4. Anxiety69

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    awesome twist ending :rock:
     
    Anxiety69, Mar 28, 2010
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  5. Probe

    Probe Experienced Member Uploader Experienced member Forum Member


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    yea awsomne!! :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
    "I press it between my hands, smell it, taste it, experience it. " that part freaked me out at first :D
     
    Probe, Apr 15, 2010
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  6. Protspecd

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    I came.
     
    Protspecd, Apr 15, 2010
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    Twice.
     
    travel-onn, Apr 25, 2010
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  8. Arjay691

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    :lmao: :thumbsup:
     
    Arjay691, Apr 25, 2010
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  9. Carlos

    Carlos Experienced Member Experienced member Forum Member


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    haha, same here....i totally fell for it
     
    Carlos, Apr 25, 2010
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