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POST SOMETHING CREATIVE!!!

Discussion in 'D.I.Y. - Creative section' started by Anxiety69, Mar 17, 2010.

  1. Anxiety69

    Anxiety69 Experienced Member Uploader Experienced member Forum Member


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    Yay first post in this new sub forum!! someone post some poetry or artwork for us to read / look at :)
     

  2. SurgeryXdisaster

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    Drew this logo for local band Avulsion SS
    Had my friend color it on photoshop and such
    Its not completely finished but is getting there.
    [​IMG]
     
  3. Anxiety69

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    i like it, except is the hand supposed to be kind of greenish? or is my monitor kaput?
     
  4. SurgeryXdisaster

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    haha yeah it's green

    also i was fooling around with garage band
    so now i got this going:

    http://www.myspace.com/bakedgoods630

    (Not punk btw, ima just call it experimental)

    dunno wtf im gonna do with it,
    but its just a little project outside of my band
    maybe get someone else to collaborate
     
  5. persona-non-grata

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    uhm i just got started on a new song for my band (also called persona non grata) but i cant get inspired to write more annyone got sum ideas?

    here it is:
    in the gutter

    john is out of school walking home to the slums
    mommy kicked out dad again cus he was fucking drunk
    got no money got no food cuz dad spent it on booze
    but hey who cares that's life if you snooze you lose

    in the gutter- so unfair
    in the gutter- it's always there
    in the gutter- got rent to pay
    in the gutter- now you're a stray
     
  6. Anxiety69

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    cool beans, kind of sounds like it could be an oi song.
     
  7. persona-non-grata

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    tnx dude it's kinda hard though to get it done becouse i wanna keep it in the whole "john" story but i can't find a way to get that done :S
     
  8. Anxiety69

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    hmmm... well what do u see happening to john in the story?
     
  9. persona-non-grata

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    well he an his parents get kicked out and he has to live on the streets (as the chorus kinda clears a bit) then he meets sum punks gets to hang with them and he'll get a decent life out of punk (maybe by playing it) :p
     
  10. Rathryn

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    Dude... told you before, divide this plot-line into segments you can easily turn into 4 lines. Basically you have your lay-out, now cut it up a bit. Then write the first line, the second, etc :p
     
  11. persona-non-grata

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    ok i posted sum lyrics here cuz i couldn't finish em well now i have i changed it up a bit ow and special thanks to lunadimae for helping me out :p

    it's gonna be something like my fav subhumans song (ten extra punk points for the one who can figure out what subhumans song that is)

    in the gutter

    chorus: SLOW!!
    waking in the guter feeling so cold
    stomach rumbling completely out of mould
    don't have anything but the clothes on your back
    too fucked up to run when the cops attack
    in the gutter 4x GAIN SPEED<

    john is out of school walking home to the slums
    mommy kicked out dad again cuz he was fucking drunk
    got no money got no food cuz dad spent it on booze
    but hey who cares that's life if you snooze you lose

    chorus

    pigs kick him out the house now john is a bum
    now everyone he sees is treating him like scum
    john becomes a punk just to try to make a life
    squatting stealing dumpster diving all just to survive

    chorus

    pigs evict the squat that john was living in
    now he is in jail for committing this sin
    john he says he this is not so bad
    at least now i got a fucking roof over my head

    chorus

    plz tell me if you like it or not :p
     
  12. Arjay691

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    Creative. I like it.
    Whats your band called? And you guys got awebsite or anything?
     
  13. Derek Danger

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    I have some lyrics for my band, see what you think, first one's a work in progress and I don't know if it's any good but here goes.

    Hipocrossy

    No infected blood
    Runs through my veins
    I fuck men
    But I don't have AIDS
    I knew a nice straight man
    He got HIV
    Yet you still don't
    Want blood from me

    I got no Red Cross
    Hanging over my head
    'Cause of what I do
    When I'm in my bed
    I protect myself
    But they still don't care
    The answer's STILL NEGATIVE
    ISN'T THAT UNFAIR?

    The red cross don't want my blood
    Because they think that it's infected
    But I have to tell you bud
    You've been sadly misdirected
    Not all homosexuals are AIDS-ridden plague rats
    Not everyone who loves a man takes strangers bareback
    I'm clean and I'm protected
    And my blood is not infected
    But I still have to keep it to myself

    The next one's slightly more jovial, it's about (and entitled) Cheap Fame and it's about people who really piss me off:

    I want my face on every TV station
    I wanna be a big celebrity
    I don't want to be told that cheap fame fades fast
    You should read my reveal-all biography
    And maybe shed a tear for me
    Then buy the film on dvd

    I want my name in more than local papers
    I wanna know my fame's preceding me
    Some interviewer just called me sanctimonious
    But I've got no damn idea what that word means
    Maybe he's complimenting me
    Please buy my new-release CD

    I want my autopsy on the evening news
    Want a fucking front page obituary
    When I die everybody should be mourning
    And years from now you might remember me
    I'll sell the rights to it early
    Watch my funeral on TV
     
  14. Anxiety69

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    susan?
     
  15. Ivanovich

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    This is last thing I wrote, well, co-wrote really:

    You aint fucking human, wallowing in their pain
    It's all just cash and power, same old fucking game
    Sick sadistic mutilator, piece of shit, fucking traitor
    Dr Bloodcoat, fucking nutter, psychopath investigator
    You take away their freedom, torture every day
    Feed them with your poison, then watch them waste away
    He's got a BA in mutilation, hacking away in fascination
    Government funded torture, fucking scum
    So you better start running, find a place to hide
    Cos we gathering an army, will bust you open wide
    And we never gonna rest til every animal saved
    And we drinking to their freedom, while pissing on your graves
    Whatever it takes.
     
  16. persona-non-grata

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    my band is also called persona non grata we have a myspace page but no music online yet www.myspace.com/personanongratapunk i'm the guitar player / singer :p
     
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